tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2043167560963254860.post3517407096754522652..comments2012-02-01T14:06:37.322-08:00Comments on Letters To Sylvia: Cody BurkheimerMr. Ahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17512191217857868013noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2043167560963254860.post-44930683419152885582012-01-29T20:23:16.708-08:002012-01-29T20:23:16.708-08:00I disagree with daniel. I believe this deserves a ...I disagree with daniel. I believe this deserves a 2 because it demonstrates a weak ability to persuade the reader. Transitions are not existent, and the key sturcture is weak. The first contention does not connect ideas efficiently. The second argument is better but doesn't articulate well. The third contention uses great information, but I don't feel that it applies this to persuade Sylvia effectively. In my opinion, the best fit for this response is a 4.Kevin Caravaggiohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00634129346860750485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2043167560963254860.post-90099674085208179142012-01-26T23:33:16.521-08:002012-01-26T23:33:16.521-08:00I would give this a 3 because it follows the key, ...I would give this a 3 because it follows the key, but you have to have four reasons not three to at least pass. Anyway great job!danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05872407043096292286noreply@blogger.com