Daniel Sklyarov

Daniel Sklyarov

Mr. A

1/25/12

English II

Dear Sylvia,

            Some people don’t have the opportunity that you were gifted with. You’re a good friend and I don’t think it’s a good idea to be emancipated from your home. You are going to make this too hard for yourself, and you are going to struggle financially, because many 16 year olds get a job. The reason why you shouldn’t move out is because of money, parents, boyfriend, and school.

            One of the reasons why you shouldn’t move out is because of money. Now-a-days it’s much more difficult for a 16 year old to get a job, because many jobs require that you must be at least 18 years old to work. Some jobs that accept 16 year olds don’t have a good pay for living on your own. That’s why money is one of the reasons why you shouldn’t move out.

            Another reason why you shouldn’t move out is because of your parents. The reason why parents are another reason for you to stay is because they can always provide everything for you. They always give good advice when you don’t know what to do in a certain situation. This is why parents are a good reason for you to not move out. What would you do without them?

            The third reason why you shouldn’t move out is because of your boyfriend. The reason why your boyfriend is an obstacle for you to move out is because your boyfriend lives with his parents. That’s not a good example especially when he doesn’t have a job. You van love this guy, be he is not capable of taking care of a family. This is why your boyfriend was a reason for not moving.

            Last reason why you shouldn’t move out, because of school. The reason why school is another obstacle for you to move is that you still have a lot to learn in school. You have to finish school in order to start a life by-yourself, or have a job. That is why school must be finished before moving out.

            The reason why you shouldn’t move out is because of money, parents, boyfriend, and school. You don’t have enough money. Your parents control your freedom. Your boyfriend lives with his parents and he’s broke. You haven’t finished school yet. It’s better to stay at home with parents, because they can take care of you.

Sincerely,

Daniel Sklyarov